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This was gorgeous to read, Emily, thanks for sharing. (And thanks for the visual example of the birthday card ritual, too!)

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Oh, Katie, thank you. I thought it best to include because although I know exactly what I’m talking about, when you’re so *in* the writing of something it’s hard to know whether it actually translates! Plus, it’s quite a strange thing to do I suppose..!

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I’ve just read this again after reading earlier today, and I loved it even more the second time. I wish I could write like this!

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Ahh I love that you read it again, Charli. Thank you! You are a brilliant writer and I can’t wait to read anything you let me get my hands on!

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I didn't see the ending coming....

and the constraints and architecture of the WITD exercise fell away/made invisible by the inherent power of the story within.

Lovely.

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Oh, I'm so glad you say that about the ending - when I wrote it that's what I hoped for, but thought maybe I was overestimating my ability to make it a reality!!

Thank you so much for reading, Jill.

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Absolutely loved these two short essays! Beautiful, relatable, and raw. 💙 (And I love Rebecca Solnit!!)

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Ahh thank you, Christina. I love her too - and her thoughts on desire and longing just really captured something for me that I have never been able to express!

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Trying to force intimacy when it isn’t there, and the cosy feeling of ‘rightness’ when you find what you were craving for all those years. Beautifully expressed. 💙🩵

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That's exactly it. The difference between trying to crowbar the love in and the love existing, regardless of what you do. Thank you so much, as always, for reading x

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This writing 🫠🫠🫠🫠 And the BLUENESS!!!

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💙 The blue of course made me think of our colours! You know it always means a lot when you read these essays x

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